Change the scene!

November 4, 2017

I’ve just completed a challenge as a student today at Cable Beach Primary School with their BRACE TDS lesson on writing: Change the Scene!

We were given a basic sentence and had to finish it by adding extra details- adjectives, adverb, change the verb.

“The old man walked down the street.”

Half the class needed to portray the old man in a positive light, while the other half in a negative light.

Here is mine!!

Messy… but fun!

Share your sentence with me:

– Change the verb

– Insert two adjectives (describing words like sunny, wide)

– Insert one adverb (describes the verb like excitedly, happily, angrily)

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